Wednesday, December 7, 2011

The Way

I was raking leaves into the street. The city picks them up. I don’t know where they take them. The dog watched me work. He raised his head as a car pulled to a stop near me. A woman inside needed directions. My knowledge of the streets and avenues is encyclopedic. A cigarette dangled from her red lips. She spoke through it. Smoke rolled out the window. She asked, Do you know where God lives? I leaned on my rake to think about it. The dog walked up behind me. He growled. Dogs know. I imagined the streets. Unfolded a paper map inside my mind. The woman waited. She took the cigarette from her lips. It was stained with lipstick. I pointed down the street. Without understanding any of it, I explained the way. It sounded very nearby. She put the cigarette back in her mouth. Put the car in gear. She thanked me. I made a strange motion with my hand, saying, you can’t miss it. I’m sure I won’t, she said, and drove away. I stood in the street. Held the rake. A few more leaves fell at my feet. Her car disappeared around the corner. I stared after it for a long time. The dog whimpered. Or maybe that was me.

2 comments:

  1. Loved it. I am rereading to savor, I can smell the cigarette, the dog is a nice touch. You rock, Brian!

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  2. Thank you, Susan! I saw the cigarette happening as the scene formed for me. That and the odd hand motion directing the woman somehow on her way forward while he stays still wondering what he just said and did.

    Our dog, however, was very upset to be transformed from a she into a he just to make a prose poem that much clearer. So it goes.

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